T-6. Six days until the Traveller Liftoff crowdfunding.
Rouven Weinbach
(26 Aug 2014 06:00 UTC)
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Re: [TML] T-6. Six days until the Traveller Liftoff crowdfunding.
Ros Knox & Michael Barry
(26 Aug 2014 13:30 UTC)
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Re: [TML] T-6. Six days until the Traveller Liftoff crowdfunding.
Craig Berry
(26 Aug 2014 16:42 UTC)
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Re: [TML] T-6. Six days until the Traveller Liftoff crowdfunding.
Rouven Weinbach
(26 Aug 2014 18:28 UTC)
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Re: [TML] T-6. Six days until the Traveller Liftoff crowdfunding. Rob Dean (26 Aug 2014 18:43 UTC)
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Re: [TML] T-6. Six days until the Traveller Liftoff crowdfunding. Rob Dean 26 Aug 2014 18:43 UTC
If you need it, I'm a real freelance proofreader... Rob Dean -- Mobilis in mobile > On Aug 26, 2014, at 2:28 PM, Rouven Weinbach <weinbach@13mann.de> wrote: > > Thanks for pointing that out. We didn't do an extensive proofreading for > the layout sample but will definately do so for the final product. After > all, there are still changes coming in. > > Am 26.08.2014 18:41, schrieb Craig Berry: >> Looks very nice, but I'd suggest an intense cycle of proofreading. >> Just flipping through, I found at the top of page 6 in the "Did you >> know" box "no one *as* found out" rather than "has". Also, "northpole" >> rather than "north pole". >> >> Also, that storm isn't permanent, so that part is wrong, and it could >> be explained at any time, so this text is at high risk of becoming >> obsolete. >> >>> On Mon, Aug 25, 2014 at 11:00 PM, Rouven Weinbach <weinbach@13mann.de> wrote: >>> If you haven't heard of Traveller Liftoff, it's a Starter Set for >>> Mongoose Traveller, and we've been working on it for some months now. >>> Now with six days left until the crowdfunding we want to show you a >>> sample layout of Liftoff. Many of you like the old plain layout and we >>> respect that, but in order to capture a new and younger audience we had >>> to spice things up a little. The layout had to be visually pleasing >>> while at the same time not distract the reading. And this is our solution. >>> >>> http://www.13mann.com/index.php/en/traveller-starter-set/downloads?download=211:liftoff-sample-layout >>> >>> ----- >>> The Traveller Mailing List >>> Archives at http://archives.simplelists.com/tml >>> Report problems to listmom@travellercentral.com >>> To unsubscribe from this list please goto >>> http://www.simplelists.com/confirm.php?u=PltOdItWBSgOP4y0Q6abkGbDI1eus0lz > > ----- > The Traveller Mailing List > Archives at http://archives.simplelists.com/tml > Report problems to listmom@travellercentral.com > To unsubscribe from this list please goto > http://www.simplelists.com/confirm.php?u=bTtzAxuMNmDDGaoJ7rP2zTVf0vW6N0Me